Cool Spooky Story

vibepa · Post by **vibepa** » Wed Jun 02, 2004 5:49 pm

Totally work safe but a very long readhttp://www.holyshiite.com/caver/page1.html

Kangaroooski · Post by **Kangaroooski** » Wed Jun 02, 2004 10:27 pm

Wow that is pretty spooky.

Nervous_Dog · Post by **Nervous_Dog** » Wed Jun 02, 2004 10:31 pm

Creepy. I never wanted to go caving before, and now I REALLY don't want to.

futseal04 · Post by **futseal04** » Thu Jun 03, 2004 12:27 am

I couldn't get page 11.....weird

drunkenmaxx · Post by **drunkenmaxx** » Thu Jun 03, 2004 12:40 am

yeah, and some of the pages were just blank!

futseal04 · Post by **futseal04** » Thu Jun 03, 2004 1:31 am

now i am all creeped out.....i keep expecting to see that heiroglyphic flash across my screen like in "the ring"Spooky....

ebslopp · Post by **ebslopp** » Thu Jun 03, 2004 1:46 am

The story is a fake. Turns out it was actually a short story written back in 1968. Who ever posted it decided to change the names. If you do a google search you can find out more.

AKLGT · Post by **AKLGT** » Thu Jun 03, 2004 2:09 am

looks like an interesting story. will have to read later. too long for work!

Reynoma · Post by **Reynoma** » Thu Jun 03, 2004 3:56 am

Good story. Very well written (by whoever wrote it). It would make a good movie.

redlava · Post by **redlava** » Thu Jun 03, 2004 11:07 am

Very good story, real or fake. I am gonna have to find the original story, and share with some friends. Gave me the chills a few times.The one thing that made me think it was real until the end was the pictures following the discriptions in the story. Not sure how they got those like that, but something to talk about with the skeptics.

redlava · Post by **redlava** » Thu Jun 03, 2004 12:27 pm

Found a forum about this story. Here is the link. http://www.abovetopsecret.com/...7/pg1

Fialchar · Post by **Fialchar** » Fri Jun 04, 2004 3:14 am

I can never get past page ten. It sends me to a screen saying page not found.

drummerdude · Post by **drummerdude** » Fri Jun 04, 2004 3:17 am

That really ticks me off.. I was so involved in his story! I love that guys writing style. Whoever he may be!

Fialchar · Post by **Fialchar** » Fri Jun 04, 2004 3:21 am

So I guess page 11 won't work for anyone?Edit: Frank Stevens (The guy from HOLYSHIITE.com who wrote that) found the story on angelfire.com and put it on his website. It's a hoax and the original author remains unknown.

redlava · Post by **redlava** » Fri Jun 04, 2004 8:26 am

Quote, originally posted by Fialchar Â»I can never get past page ten. It sends me to a screen saying page not found. You are not supposed too. It is a classic short story ending, implying that the person (Ted) never made it back from the cave so he never got to update the webpage. Looks like Ted is dead along with Joe, and maybe B too.

Merzbow · Post by **Merzbow** » Fri Jun 04, 2004 8:42 am

That's a sweet story, I haven't had time to finish yet though. i'm at the part where he first gets trhough the hole. It's keepin me on edge.

AKLGT · Post by **AKLGT** » Fri Jun 04, 2004 8:44 am

is it me, or does it kinda remind you of the blair witch project???

Pablo1669 · Post by **Pablo1669** » Mon Jun 07, 2004 12:00 am

Quote, originally posted by trdvibe Â»is it me, or does it kinda remind you of the blair witch project???Thats exactly the thought I had of this story.

Mr. Poopypants · Post by **Mr. Poopypants** » Mon Jun 07, 2004 3:39 am

GRRRR, Good story, stupid ending.

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