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Cool Spooky Story

Posted: Wed Jun 02, 2004 5:49 pm
by vibepa
Totally work safe but a very long readhttp://www.holyshiite.com/caver/page1.html

Re: Cool Spooky Story (vibepa)

Posted: Wed Jun 02, 2004 10:27 pm
by Kangaroooski
Wow that is pretty spooky.

Re: Cool Spooky Story (Kangaroooski)

Posted: Wed Jun 02, 2004 10:31 pm
by Nervous_Dog
Creepy. I never wanted to go caving before, and now I REALLY don't want to.

Re: Cool Spooky Story (vibepa)

Posted: Thu Jun 03, 2004 12:27 am
by futseal04
I couldn't get page 11.....weird

Re: Cool Spooky Story (futseal04)

Posted: Thu Jun 03, 2004 12:40 am
by drunkenmaxx
yeah, and some of the pages were just blank!

Re: Cool Spooky Story (drunkenvibe)

Posted: Thu Jun 03, 2004 1:31 am
by futseal04
now i am all creeped out.....i keep expecting to see that heiroglyphic flash across my screen like in "the ring"Spooky....

Re: Cool Spooky Story (futseal04)

Posted: Thu Jun 03, 2004 1:46 am
by ebslopp
The story is a fake. Turns out it was actually a short story written back in 1968. Who ever posted it decided to change the names. If you do a google search you can find out more.

Re: Cool Spooky Story (vibepa)

Posted: Thu Jun 03, 2004 2:09 am
by AKLGT
looks like an interesting story. will have to read later. too long for work!

Re: Cool Spooky Story (trdvibe)

Posted: Thu Jun 03, 2004 3:56 am
by Reynoma
Good story. Very well written (by whoever wrote it). It would make a good movie.

Re: Cool Spooky Story (Reynoma)

Posted: Thu Jun 03, 2004 11:07 am
by redlava
Very good story, real or fake. I am gonna have to find the original story, and share with some friends. Gave me the chills a few times.The one thing that made me think it was real until the end was the pictures following the discriptions in the story. Not sure how they got those like that, but something to talk about with the skeptics.

Re: Cool Spooky Story (redlava)

Posted: Thu Jun 03, 2004 12:27 pm
by redlava
Found a forum about this story. Here is the link. http://www.abovetopsecret.com/...7/pg1

Re: Cool Spooky Story (redlava)

Posted: Fri Jun 04, 2004 3:14 am
by Fialchar
I can never get past page ten. It sends me to a screen saying page not found.

Re: Cool Spooky Story (redlava)

Posted: Fri Jun 04, 2004 3:17 am
by drummerdude
That really ticks me off.. I was so involved in his story! I love that guys writing style. Whoever he may be!

Re: Cool Spooky Story (drummerdude)

Posted: Fri Jun 04, 2004 3:21 am
by Fialchar
So I guess page 11 won't work for anyone?Edit: Frank Stevens (The guy from HOLYSHIITE.com who wrote that) found the story on angelfire.com and put it on his website. It's a hoax and the original author remains unknown.

Re: Cool Spooky Story (Fialchar)

Posted: Fri Jun 04, 2004 8:26 am
by redlava
Quote, originally posted by Fialchar »I can never get past page ten. It sends me to a screen saying page not found. You are not supposed too. It is a classic short story ending, implying that the person (Ted) never made it back from the cave so he never got to update the webpage. Looks like Ted is dead along with Joe, and maybe B too.

Re: Cool Spooky Story (vibepa)

Posted: Fri Jun 04, 2004 8:42 am
by Merzbow
That's a sweet story, I haven't had time to finish yet though. i'm at the part where he first gets trhough the hole. It's keepin me on edge.

Re: Cool Spooky Story (Merzbow)

Posted: Fri Jun 04, 2004 8:44 am
by AKLGT
is it me, or does it kinda remind you of the blair witch project???

Re: Cool Spooky Story (trdvibe)

Posted: Mon Jun 07, 2004 12:00 am
by Pablo1669
Quote, originally posted by trdvibe »is it me, or does it kinda remind you of the blair witch project???Thats exactly the thought I had of this story.

Re: Cool Spooky Story (vibepa)

Posted: Mon Jun 07, 2004 3:39 am
by Mr. Poopypants
GRRRR, Good story, stupid ending.